1.) The writer tries to discover and understand better the revision process. And the more research he does with his other editors he finds more on professional revising.
2.) They divided editors into groups by knowledge and opinions. So they basically studied each other to see the different opinions. Analyzing was all about different opinions.
3.) Professional editing differs from student in many ways. Professional gets payed and edits 10 times more precise. Student does what he has to for the paper to look good for somebody else. Professional has to make it look and sound good for a lot more people. Plus a student can do whatever they want on the paper a professional has guidelines.

journal entry 6

1.) Bitzer does not mean that rhetorical situation is easy that you only have to know it. Also he doesn’t mean that rhetorical situation exists when discourse exists. There are times were rhetorical exists even though discourse is not there.

2.) Bitzer said that rhetorical situation is to produce action or a change also can be to fix problems.

3.) Exigence is something that can be changed for the better. For example, all the new hybrid cars that have come out they’ve changed for the good of the world. And everyday more and more cars will change.

journal entry 5

Dewey and David argue that specialization has changed the world of education. One believes that specialization in the long run will mess with the English studies that already today there to many specializations. The other one argues that its not bad for people. People will get back together as they have done in the past but its a hard issue. They just don’t want to lose English as an essential class for students around the world.

journal entry 3

1.) Bartholomae means that all students need to take economics and other classes to create a proper structure and evaluation of interpreting and speaking. So they can develop own skills.

2.) What he means is that students need to express themselves in the way they feel like. Every person has its own unique way of thinking so any input anybody gives is always good.

3.) First person talked about changing sock colors in a paper of his own. Bartholomae liked because it was different but said the paper was that good. For the second paper a girl wanted to write music but she didn’t play that good. Bartholomae said she wasn’t that creative since it was copying music.

journal entry 2

“Hamilton is going to win many more championships”

Claim: Hamilton will win many more championships
Data: He already won one in only two years of racing
Warrant: Every Englishmen believes Hamilton will win
Grounds: Every Englishmen believes Hamilton is the best driver in the world
Backing: There has been a dominating driver in formula 1 before
Qualifier: If Hamilton lost his drive at Mercedes he would probably never win again
Conditions of rebuttal: If Mercedes doesn’t perform as well as the last two years Hamilton will not win

journal entry 1

“Hamilton is going to win many more championships”

The claim that’s being made is that Lewis Hamilton a formula 1 driver will win a couple of more championships. That he is the driver with the biggest ratings to win another champion ship.
I would have to say that this claim is of value. The person who wrote this article was an English person. Being that Hamilton is English this person is using its own feelings to say that Hamilton will win again. Its part true but also of value.
The evidence the writer used was that Hamilton has been in two championship runs when he only has raced two. In his rookie year he almost won and second year he was champion.

List of interests

Car driving
motocross riding
motocross equpment
Music festivals
Some video games
play any sport
Soccer
Rugby
Formula one
Managing sports
Sport camps
Traveling
Skiing